Title: Frenkle's Poetry Post by: HaywireAcorn on November 04, 2008, 04:09:37 AM I write poems... I figured I should share them with everyone because I want to know if I should put them in my children's novel.
GRASPING IT You stand erect, gripping it tightly, the wood glistening, your hands are sweating. I stand in amazement, watching you work, Oh how I love, To watch you play baseball SHOWER ME Raining on me, it runs down my body, I gleam in the sun, in this golden shower, I am very sticky, because instead of water, my shower sprays honey. SPRAWLED OUT Beautiful, seductive, Sprawled out you lay, unconscious from schnapps? what made you this way? A roofie perhaps? Now I see why, You're just a guy... SWEET Ouch, stop, this is uncomfortable, being with you is, more painful than swallowing... Tomatoes whole DEPTH It pains me, from me it flowed, you got sad and angry, I already told you about my chode. Don't be too harsh on my work... -Frenkle Title: Re: Frenkle's Poetry Post by: Paul on November 04, 2008, 04:10:50 AM lawls!
Title: Re: Frenkle's Poetry Post by: Grimsweeper on November 04, 2008, 09:04:29 AM nominated for every prize for literature, even the journalism awards.
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